Ad Copy Examples That Convert: Platform-by-Platform Breakdown

Angrez Aley

Angrez Aley

Senior paid ads manager

20255 min read

Different platforms require different copy approaches. A high-intent Google searcher needs different messaging than someone scrolling TikTok.

This guide breaks down copy strategies for 8 major ad formats, with examples, templates, and testing ideas for each. No generic advice—specific tactics you can implement today.


Platform Comparison: Copy Requirements at a Glance

PlatformCopy LengthPrimary GoalToneHook Window
Facebook FeedMedium (125-250 chars primary)Stop scroll, drive actionConversational1-2 seconds
Instagram StoriesMinimal (3-5 words overlay)Complement visual, drive swipeDirect, urgent1 second
Google Search (RSA)Short (30 char headlines, 90 char descriptions)Match intent, earn clickDirect, benefit-focusedInstant
LinkedInLonger (150-300 chars)Establish authority, generate leadsProfessional, educational2-3 seconds
TikTokMinimal (caption style)Blend with organic, entertainNative, creator-style1 second
Email Subject LinesUltra-short (30-50 chars)Earn the openPersonal, urgentInstant
YouTube Pre-RollScript (first 5 seconds critical)Prevent skip, deliver messagePattern-interrupt5 seconds
Display RetargetingUltra-short (<10 words)Remind, incentivize returnDirect, offer-focusedInstant

1. Facebook Feed Ads

Facebook Feed ads appear natively in the content stream. Your copy competes with posts from friends and pages—it must feel personal, not corporate.

Copy Structure

Hook → Value → CTA

ElementPurposeCharacter Guide
Hook (first line)Stop the scrollKeep above "See more" fold (~125 chars)
ValueExplain the benefit1-2 short sentences
CTADirect next actionClear, specific instruction

Example Breakdown

Weak copy:

Our new software uses AI technology to help businesses improve their marketing efforts. Learn more about our features today.

Strong copy:

Spending more time building ads than analyzing results?

[Product] automates campaign creation so you can launch 100+ variations in 15 minutes—not 15 hours.

See how it works →

Why the strong version works:

  • Opens with a question that qualifies the audience
  • Quantifies the benefit (100+ variations, 15 minutes)
  • Creates contrast (15 minutes vs. 15 hours)
  • Clear CTA

Facebook Feed Templates

Problem-focused:

```

[Question that identifies pain point]?

[Product] [mechanism] so you can [outcome].

[Specific proof point or stat]

[CTA] →

```

Benefit-focused:

```

[Quantified benefit headline]

[How it works in one sentence]

Join [number]+ [audience type] who [achieved result].

[CTA] →

```

Social proof-focused:

```

"[Short testimonial quote]" — [Name, Title]

[Product] helped [company type] [achieve specific result].

[CTA] →

```

Testing Variables

VariableTest ATest B
Hook typeQuestionStatement
Benefit angleTime savedMoney saved
Proof typeUser countNamed testimonial
CTA styleSoft ("See how")Direct ("Start free trial")

2. Instagram Stories Ads

Full-screen, vertical, ephemeral. Users tap through quickly—you have about 1 second to communicate value.

Core Principle

The visual is the hook. Copy is the CTA.

Stories copy isn't about building a narrative. It's about providing a clear directive that complements a strong visual.

Copy Guidelines

ElementGuideline
Word count3-5 words maximum
PlacementBottom third (above swipe area)
FontBold, high contrast against background
PurposeTell user what to do, not what to think

Example Breakdown

Weak:

Discover our amazing new collection of summer styles that will transform your wardrobe this season

Strong:

New drops. Swipe to shop.

Why it works:

  • Ultra-concise (4 words)
  • Creates urgency ("New")
  • Clear action ("Swipe to shop")
  • Lets the visual sell the product

Stories Copy Formulas

FormulaExample
[Urgency] + [Action]"Last chance. Swipe up."
[Benefit] + [Action]"50% off. Shop now."
[New] + [Category]"New arrivals. Tap to see."
[Scarcity] + [Action]"Only 12 left. Claim yours."

Testing Variables

VariableTest ATest B
Text placementBottom centerTop left
Urgency levelMild ("New")Strong ("Ends tonight")
CTA wording"Swipe up""Shop now"
With/without emoji"🔥 New drops""New drops"

3. Google Responsive Search Ads (RSAs)

RSAs serve high-intent users actively searching for solutions. Google's algorithm assembles your headlines and descriptions into the best-performing combinations.

Copy Requirements

AssetCharacter LimitQuantity
Headlines30 characters3-15 (recommend 10-15)
Descriptions90 characters2-4 (recommend 4)

Strategic Asset Categories

Create headlines across these categories to give Google diverse options:

CategoryPurposeExample
Keyword matchSignal relevance"Facebook Ads Management Tool"
Benefit statementCommunicate value"Save 10+ Hours Per Week"
Social proofBuild credibility"Trusted by 5,000+ Marketers"
Offer/incentiveDrive action"Start Your Free Trial Today"
DifferentiationStand out"AI-Powered Campaign Optimization"
CTADirect action"Get Started in Minutes"

Example Asset Set

Headlines:

  1. Facebook Ads Automation Tool
  2. Launch Campaigns 10x Faster
  3. AI-Powered Ad Optimization
  4. Trusted by 5,000+ Brands
  5. Start Your Free Trial Today
  6. Save 40 Hours Per Month
  7. Scale Winning Ads Faster
  8. No Credit Card Required
  9. See Results in Minutes
  10. Built for Performance Marketers

Descriptions:

  1. Automate campaign creation and let AI identify your top performers. Launch 100+ ad variations in minutes, not days.
  2. Stop guessing which creative works. Our AI ranks every ad by ROAS so you scale winners with confidence.
  3. Join thousands of marketers who've cut campaign setup time by 90%. Start your free 14-day trial today.
  4. From creative testing to budget optimization—manage your entire paid strategy from one dashboard.

RSA Best Practices

  • Don't repeat: Each headline should add new information
  • Pin sparingly: Only pin brand name (position 1) or legal requirements
  • Front-load value: Key message in first 15 characters (mobile truncation)
  • Include numbers: "Save 40 Hours" outperforms "Save Time"
  • Match landing page: Headline promises must be immediately visible on landing page

Testing Approach

RSAs test automatically, but monitor:

  • Which headlines appear most frequently (Google's winners)
  • Ad strength score (aim for "Good" or "Excellent")
  • Individual asset performance in the "Assets" report

4. LinkedIn Sponsored Content (B2B)

LinkedIn users are in professional mode—seeking career growth, industry insights, and business solutions. Hard-sell copy underperforms.

Copy Approach

Educate first, sell second.

ElementLinkedIn Approach
ToneProfessional, authoritative
LengthLonger acceptable (150-300 chars)
HookData, insights, outcomes
CTALow-friction (report, webinar, guide)

Example Breakdown

Weak:

Try our marketing software today! We have great features and excellent customer support. Sign up now!

Strong:

67% of B2B marketers say proving ROI is their top challenge.

Our 2024 report breaks down how high-performing teams connect campaigns to revenue—with frameworks you can implement this quarter.

Download the free report →

Why it works:

  • Leads with relevant statistic (credibility)
  • Addresses a specific professional pain point
  • Offers value before asking for anything
  • Low-friction CTA (free report, not "buy now")

LinkedIn Copy Templates

Data-led:

```

[Surprising statistic about audience's challenge]

[How your content/product addresses it]

[What they'll learn/gain]

[Low-friction CTA] →

```

Outcome-focused:

```

How [recognizable company/segment] [achieved impressive result]:

• [Key tactic 1]

• [Key tactic 2]

• [Key tactic 3]

Get the full breakdown → [CTA]

```

Question hook:

```

What's your team's biggest challenge with [topic]?

We surveyed [number] [audience type] to find out—and the answers might surprise you.

See the results → [CTA]

```

LinkedIn-Specific Tactics

TacticWhy It Works
Lead with dataProfessionals respond to quantified claims
Name-drop companies"How Salesforce..." adds credibility
Offer reports/guidesLower commitment than product trial
Ask questionsDrives comments, boosts organic reach
Use industry jargon appropriatelySignals you understand their world

Testing Variables

VariableTest ATest B
Hook typeStatisticQuestion
Social proofCompany namesUser count
CTA"Download report""Watch webinar"
LengthShort (100 chars)Long (250 chars)

5. TikTok In-Feed Ads

TikTok ads must feel like organic content. Polished, corporate-style ads get skipped immediately.

Core Principle

Don't make ads. Make TikToks.

The copy exists to support creator-style content, not replace it.

Copy Guidelines

ElementGuideline
Caption styleConversational, first-person
LengthShort—like a real TikTok caption
ToneCasual, trend-aware, slightly unpolished
CTASubtle or built into video

Example Breakdown

Weak (corporate):

Introducing our revolutionary new skincare line! Our products are scientifically formulated to give you radiant, glowing skin. Shop now at our website!

Strong (native):

POV: you finally found a skincare routine that actually works 👀

(link in bio)

Why it works:

  • Uses native format ("POV:")
  • Conversational, first-person
  • Emoji usage matches platform
  • Subtle CTA

TikTok Caption Formulas

FormulaExample
POV: [relatable scenario]"POV: your ads finally stop losing money"
[Thing] that just hits different"Campaign automation that just hits different"
Tell me [X] without telling me [X]"Tell me you're a media buyer without telling me"
No one asked but..."No one asked but here's how I cut CAC by 40%"
[Controversial take]"Unpopular opinion: manual bidding is dead"

TikTok-Specific Tactics

TacticImplementation
Use trending soundsBuild ad around popular audio
Embrace imperfectionSlightly shaky camera, unscripted moments
Hook in first 1 secondMovement, face close-up, text overlay
Native CTAs"Link in bio" vs. platform button
Creator partnershipsLet creators write the copy in their voice

6. Email Subject Lines

The subject line determines whether your email gets opened or deleted. It's the most constrained and highest-impact copy you'll write.

Character Guidelines

DeviceVisible Characters
Desktop60-70 characters
Mobile30-40 characters
RecommendationFront-load key message in first 30 chars

Subject Line Psychology

Four primary drivers:

DriverExampleWhen to Use
Personalization"[Name], your cart is waiting"Abandoned cart, re-engagement
Urgency"Sale ends in 2 hours"Promotions, limited offers
Curiosity"This changed how we run ads"Newsletters, content promotion
Value"Save $50 on your next order"Promotions, win-back

Example Breakdown

Weak:

Check out our latest newsletter with updates and news

Strong:

Your campaign is underperforming. Here's why.

Why it works:

  • Creates immediate concern (pattern interrupt)
  • Promises specific value (the "why")
  • Personal ("your campaign")
  • Curiosity gap (need to open to learn more)

Subject Line Formulas

FormulaExample
[Name], [personalized message]"Sarah, you left something behind"
[Number] + [benefit]"5 ads that drove $1M in revenue"
[Urgency] + [offer]"Last chance: 40% off ends tonight"
[Question that identifies pain]"Why are your CPMs increasing?"
[Curiosity gap]"We tested this for 30 days. Results inside."

A/B Testing Approach

Test one variable at a time:

TestVersion AVersion B
PersonalizationWith nameWithout name
Emoji"🔥 Sale ends today""Sale ends today"
LengthShort (25 chars)Long (50 chars)
Urgency vs. curiosity"Ends in 2 hours""You need to see this"

Preview Text Optimization

Don't forget the preview text (the snippet after the subject line):

Subject LinePoor Preview TextStrong Preview Text
"Your weekly report is ready""View in browser \Unsubscribe""ROAS up 23%. CTR down 5%. Here's what to do."

7. YouTube Skippable Pre-Roll Ads

Users can skip after 5 seconds. Your copy (script) must hook immediately and deliver value before the skip button appears.

The 5-Second Rule

Everything critical must happen in the first 5 seconds:

  • Brand mention or logo
  • Core value proposition
  • Reason to keep watching

Script Structure

SectionTimingPurpose
Hook0-3 secondsPattern interrupt, stop the skip
Problem/Value3-10 secondsWhy this matters to viewer
Solution10-20 secondsHow your product helps
Proof20-25 secondsSocial proof, results
CTAFinal 5 secondsClear next step

Hook Types That Prevent Skips

Hook TypeExampleWhy It Works
Contrarian statement"Everything you know about Facebook ads is wrong."Challenges beliefs, creates curiosity
Direct question"Spending 10+ hours a week on ad setup?"Qualifies audience, feels personal
Surprising stat"73% of ad campaigns fail in the first week."Data creates credibility and concern
Visual pattern interruptPerson falling, unexpected actionBreaks passive viewing state
Direct address"Hey, media buyers—don't skip this."Acknowledges the skip, creates intrigue

Example Script Outline

```

[0-3 sec] HOOK:

"If you're still building Meta campaigns manually, you're wasting 40 hours a month."

[3-10 sec] PROBLEM:

"Most marketers spend more time on campaign setup than actual strategy. Uploading creatives one by one. Testing audiences randomly. Hoping something works."

[10-20 sec] SOLUTION:

"[Product] automates the entire process. Upload your assets, set your goals, and launch 100+ variations in 15 minutes. Our AI identifies winners and scales them automatically."

[20-25 sec] PROOF:

"Over 5,000 brands use [Product] to cut setup time by 90% while improving ROAS."

[25-30 sec] CTA:

"Start your free trial at [URL]. Link in the description."

```

YouTube-Specific Considerations

FactorRecommendation
SoundDesign for sound-off viewing (captions essential)
BrandingLogo visible within first 5 seconds
MobileLarge text, close-up shots
Length15-30 seconds for skippable (longer = higher skip rate)

8. Display Retargeting Banners

Retargeting banners remind warm audiences about products they've viewed. Space is extremely limited—every word must earn its place.

Copy Constraints

Banner SizeHeadline MaxBody Max
300x2505-7 words0-10 words
728x905-7 words0-5 words
160x6003-5 words0-5 words
320x50 (mobile)3-5 wordsNone

Copy Strategy

The product image sells. Copy adds urgency or incentive.

ElementPurposeExample
HeadlineRemind + hook"Still thinking about it?"
IncentiveOvercome hesitation"15% off your order"
CTA buttonDrive action"Shop Now"

Example Breakdown

Weak:

We noticed you were looking at our products. Come back and check out our great selection of items on sale now.

Strong:

[Product image]

Still interested?

15% off with code RETURN15

[Shop Now]

Why it works:

  • Acknowledges past behavior ("Still interested?")
  • Provides incentive (15% off)
  • Specific code (feels exclusive)
  • Clear CTA button

Retargeting Copy Formulas

ScenarioHeadlineIncentive
Cart abandonment"You left something behind""Complete your order—free shipping"
Product view"Still thinking about it?""15% off this item today"
Category browse"More styles you'll love""New arrivals just added"
Past purchaser"Time for a refill?""Subscribers save 20%"

Dynamic Personalization

Use dynamic creative to personalize at scale:

Dynamic ElementSource
Product imageFrom viewed product feed
Product name"The [Product Name] you viewed"
PriceCurrent price or sale price
Stock level"Only [X] left"

CTA Button Best Practices

Best PracticeReason
Contrasting colorVisual hierarchy draws eye
Action verb"Shop Now," "Claim Offer," "Complete Order"
Urgency when relevant"Shop Before It's Gone"
Consistent placementBottom right for most sizes

Cross-Platform Testing Framework

What to Test by Platform

PlatformPrimary Test Variables
Facebook FeedHook type, value angle, CTA wording
Instagram StoriesVisual vs. text-led, urgency level
Google RSAsHeadline combinations, description angles
LinkedInData points, content offer type
TikTokNative format, creator voice
EmailSubject line formula, personalization
YouTubeHook type, script length
DisplayIncentive type, urgency messaging

Testing Minimum Requirements

PlatformMinimum for Statistical Significance
Facebook/Instagram50+ conversions per variation
Google Ads100+ clicks per variation
LinkedIn50+ conversions per variation
Email1,000+ sends per variation
Display100+ clicks per variation

Tools for Scaling Copy Tests

ToolPrimary FunctionBest For
Ryze AIAI-powered copy generation and campaign optimizationCross-platform (Google + Meta) testing at scale
MadgicxCreative analytics + copy performanceMeta-specific insights
OptmyzrRSA management and testingGoogle Ads optimization
Copy.ai / JasperAI copywritingRapid variation generation
UnbounceLanding page + copy testingPost-click optimization

For teams running high-volume campaigns across Meta and Google, tools like Ryze AI can automate copy variation generation and identify winning patterns faster than manual testing allows.


Common Copy Mistakes by Platform

PlatformCommon MistakeFix
FacebookFeature-focused, no hookLead with outcome, not product
Instagram StoriesToo much text3-5 words max, let visual sell
Google RSAsRepetitive headlinesEach headline adds new info
LinkedInHard-sell toneEducate first, sell second
TikTokCorporate, polishedEmbrace native, creator style
EmailVague subject lineSpecific benefit or curiosity
YouTubeSlow hookCritical message in first 5 seconds
DisplayToo many wordsUnder 10 words, image does the work

Implementation Checklist

Before launching on any platform:

  • [ ] Copy matches platform tone and format requirements
  • [ ] Hook appears within first 1-2 seconds/lines
  • [ ] Benefit is quantified where possible
  • [ ] CTA is clear and appropriate for funnel stage
  • [ ] Copy aligns with landing page messaging
  • [ ] At least 3-5 variations ready for testing
  • [ ] Tracking in place to measure performance by variation

Summary: Platform-Specific Copy Principles

PlatformCore PrincipleKey Tactic
Facebook FeedStop the scrollQuestion hook or quantified benefit
Instagram StoriesVisual sells, copy directs3-5 word overlay with clear CTA
Google RSAsMatch intentDiverse headlines covering multiple angles
LinkedInEducate to earn trustLead with data, offer value first
TikTokBe native or get skippedCreator-style captions, trending formats
EmailEarn the openPersonalization + curiosity or urgency
YouTubeSurvive the skipPattern interrupt in first 3 seconds
DisplayRemind and incentivizeUltra-short copy + clear offer

Each platform rewards different approaches. Copy that crushes on Facebook may fail on LinkedIn. Copy that works on TikTok would feel out of place in Google Search.

Know the platform. Match the context. Test relentlessly.

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